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First Time Love
YOU MEANT SO MUCH
Pure Beauty
A Child Comes
should i go back with someone
as i stand and look

First Time Love
2:17PM on October 05, 2009

For the first time in my dismal life
I feel love flow in my heart
the same heart once thought cold and lifeless
fills with glorious joy and happiness
because of a woman
whose spirit is full of passion
her eyes that shine like sapphire stars
filled with warmth and beauty
a smile that brings happiness to my sad existence
I have never known love until now
because of the way she touched my heart
took hold of my depressed soul
and showed me the beauty of life's wonders
everything that I thought impossible
all seems to be within my grasp
I see everything in a new light
because of something I thought unworthy to feel
to feel love's tender kiss
and I bask in its beauty so
because of the feelings of a woman
whom I would love now and 'til
my heart beats its final note to life's great song

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TaQuilla
October 25, 2009 (Report It)

Beautiful!
  
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YOU MEANT SO MUCH
7:49PM on August 29, 2009

YOU MEANT SO MUCH



YOU MEANT SO MUCH TO ALL OF US
YOU WERE SPECIAL AND THAT'S NO LIE
YOU BRIGHTTENED UP THE DARKEST DAY
AND THE CLOUDIEST SKY.
 
YOUR SMILE ALONE WARMED HEARTS
YOUR LAUGH WAS LIKE MUSIC TO HEAR
I WOULD GIVE ABSOLUTILY ANYTHING
TO HEAR IT AGAIN
 
NOT A SECOND PASSES
WHEN YOURE NOT ON OUR MINDS
YOUR LOVE WE WILL NEVER FORGOTTEN
THE HURT WILL EASE IN TIME
 
MANY TEARS I HAVE SEEN AND CRIED
THEY HAVE ALL POURED OUT LIKE NOW
AND NO LONGER IN ANY PAIN.
 
 

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TheEr...
September 04, 2009 (Report It)

The teacher is bouncing through to check out blogs and you know it's a beautiful poem but please correct those mispelled words and proof read your work before posting it...smooches

misse...
August 30, 2009 (Report It)

this is a beautiful work of art......keep it up.
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Pure Beauty
4:35PM on August 29, 2009

PURE BEAUTY
 

The beauty of this day was created to you
with a gentle breeze flowing across the land
These thoughts of pure release
Found a gentle peace
As your smile came brazing through
The beauty of this day is meant for you
With the sun in my eyes
I did realize
There was a happiness I seeked in knowing you 
Amongst the scents of the field 
This hear stood still 
My life is incomplete 
That's so true
Watching the birds in the sky
A true won't lie 
This spirit will sore...
Only in search of you 
Cast not a doubt of regret 
Allow this heart to be not a threat 
This dream of this day was true 
Life was given greater meaning 
Birds chirping  Children singing  The world came to life around an image so true. 
 

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misse...
August 30, 2009 (Report It)

this is wonderful!!! your poetry is impressive....you have a beautiful mind....

Sun_Ghod
August 29, 2009 (Report It)

very nice entry bb

marin...
August 29, 2009 (Report It)

WOW now that is deep rite there wow you should be a writer keep it going sweetie
  
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A Child Comes
2:51PM on August 09, 2009

A child to be born
Existence comming to light
Words have much meaning Thoughts created dispite Born from the space of privacy Warmth Delight Viewing this world though new eyes Cries show the dislike Sounds of movements everywhere Ears quickly become tuned Grasping as much as possible Times begins to comsume Passing moments Thoughts expelled A child's mind begins to grown With age comes passion Love will help the child grow.

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TheEr...
August 30, 2009 (Report It)

This is the one I will grade...Good writing and perfect skills but I need you to keep the words spelled correctly... that I do look for...not worried about punctuation and for this one it shows a paragraph and all the things on the group board I have talked about...so I give you 95% keep up the good work and see you in class...smooches

marin...
August 29, 2009 (Report It)

that was amazing keep up them coming for real i liked it alot

Sun_Ghod
August 09, 2009 (Report It)

that is very interesting..keep em coming
  
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should i go back with someone
11:57AM on July 18, 2009

as i look at the last relationship i was in, i look at how it end up i want ot know from all my rude family should i go back to it. some of yall know who it is but if you dont just rude mail and ill tell you who it is so if you can just hit me up with some comment .

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TheEr...
August 30, 2009 (Report It)

No you shouldn't go back...and yes you should continue to move forward by holding your head up so you can see the beauty of every day life...smooches

marin...
August 29, 2009 (Report It)

well its up to you if you want to go back or not so just give it some thought on what you want to do

Sun_Ghod
August 09, 2009 (Report It)

nah jus keep doing you..the right guy will show up for you

big_a...
August 09, 2009 (Report It)

keep moving forward,not back
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as i stand and look
11:18AM on July 17, 2009

as i stand and look at where my life is at right now i am really bless to say it was nothing but got that keep me going. im doing good in school ill be out in september then ill go right back in december for my crimial justice dregee.i really can say this is a family because u can come on here talk to people that are your friends about anything and when things are going wrong in your real faimly you other people out there that can bring you some cheers and smile to a day that was all mess up for you.

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marin...
August 29, 2009 (Report It)

Well I just want to say keep up the good work and everything will work out once you get all the schooling out the way.......Good Job huggs

Sun_Ghod
August 09, 2009 (Report It)

you keep up the good work sweetie
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