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 Added: Aug 22, 2008  
 Owner: Woodywood003
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The dark side of Jack and Jill Jack's side
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One day a guy name Jack was walking down the path to Jane’s house. You see that Jane was Jack’s girlfriend. Jane was every thing in the world to Jack in a lover and a friend. But before Jack and Jane was a pair, there was a darker sadder side to our boy Jack. He was mistreated, abuse and scared almost to death by his ex-girlfriend, Jill.

Jill was mean, heartless and evil… but before Jane, Jack was head over heels in love with her. Jack always helped out Jill’s family. You see, they were falling on hard times and Jack as the guy that he was wanted to help her family out. But also Jill was playing on Jack’s feeling. Every time Jack tried to help out with the work that Jill’s family had to do… Jill makes Jack’s work harder to do.
But also Jill did not only do that to Jack, but she also was playing around on Jack too. She was cheating on him with all of Jack’s homeboys and also… Jack’s older brother, Rick which she calls “Big Dick Rick”. Jack was out of the loop left and right. Jack had only one person to turn to, Jill’s younger sister Jane. But, Jane was underage but she was more mature then Jill ever was.

Jill was going out with Rick one night and she was looking like a slut. It was like she knew what she was doing, she was going to get herself knocked up and pin all the blame on Jack. But Jack got information from a new friend of his, Jane. Jack said to Jane… “If you were 18, I would marry you.” Then she said, “My birthday is not for a month or so and also, I will turning 18.” Then Jack said to Jane, “If you are right about what you are saying about Jill, then and only then I will break up with her and become your boyfriend.”

Then when Jack when up to Lover’s peak. He saw something that would make any grown man want to find an AK-47 and blow the person that is there away, the one that the person was with and everyone else away. He saw Jill getting banged by Rick and all of Jack’s friends. Jack eyes were watering and his eyes were full of anger. But one thing our boy, was not was dumb. He knew that he can not take them all on by himself.

Jack was in a pickle, but he had at least one friend on his side. Ken, how come he can trust him? Because he doesn’t like Jill in that way, in fact he only has eyes for Jack. But Jack doesn’t dig Ken like that. So, he sores his life to helping him. Then Jack got help from the one person that wants Jill to know that she is not shit, her little sister... Jane. So, the plan was in action. He told Jane to wait for a rocket flying over the hill, and then… when Jack was ready. Ken and himself will jump in and shock the shit out of them. And Jane would grab Jill and drag her out of the car of Rick’s.

But the plan did not work and, they had kidnap Jane. Then, Rick said to his little brother… Yeah, I fucked your little girlfriend, and she came back for more and now… I am done with her, and now I want Jane. Jill said, “All no you don’t.” “I wanted to scare her out and also, tell my ex-boyfriend… Jack that it is over between us two.” “I wanted to go with you and dump all the blame of the kid that I am having on him, knowing full and well that it is your child.” “I will not let you rape my little sister, Jane!!” Then Rick told the boys to have there way with Jill. Then as they carry Jill away, Rick tore off Jane’s skirt and panties off. Then as Rick was about to stick his King Kong dick in to Jane’s untapped pussy… a pair of knifes came up, one on his neck and the other on his Johnson. It was Ken. He said to Rick, I am sorry man… but this clit belongs to some other guy. Also, he would not like it if you mess with her, ya dig?

Then Rick said to Ken, “Fuck off faggot.” Then he kicked Ken off the cliff and then he said to Jane, now where was we at? Then someone said, you are one sec away from an asswhiping. Then Jack came out of hiding and was ready to fight his older brother for Jane’s honor. Then Rick said to Jack, please boy… I trained you myself. You can not beat me. Now, if you may… you can have sloppy seconds. And as Rick was turning around to start fucking with Jane, Jack threw a rock at him.

Rick said, “Do that one more time, and you WILL die.” Then as he was about to stick the huge dick in to her little hole, Jack found the two knifes that Ken had and forced himself to the middle. Then he said to Rick again, you are one sec. away from an asswhiping, and now… your time is up. About to cut off his dick, Rick grab the other knife and started to throw his self at Jack, knowing that if Jack dies, then Rick would have Jane all to himself. Then as Jack and Rick were about to really start fighting, a few police cars was going up to the parking area. Rick said to Jack, Saved by the horn… If the cops were not to come, then your ass would be mines. But, you are going to the pen for me and I am still going to fuck your girlfriend up. Then Rick heard something that he did not want to hear, He heard a phone beeping like it was off the line. Then he saw Jane turning off the cell that she had from Jill for her 16th birthday. Then she said to Rick, you are going to Jail for a long time bitch.

Then as Rick’s friends where rounded up, Jill said to Jack, “Thank you baby for saving me from them.” Then Jack pointed up to the trees and then Jill saw a camera. Then Jack waved his right hand, Bye bye. Then He said to Jill, “Buh bye now!!!” Then, Jill was taken away by the cops too.

Then as the cops were taking them away, Jane and Jack ran to each other and started to kiss. It was over. For now, at least.

End…?


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