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Temptation

Temptation
12:13PM on July 22, 2008

Her skin is soft

So soft, and so cold

Her body is diplayed

For him to behold

Arms at her sides

Smile on her face

His eyes are hungry,

His will a disgrace

He strokes her hair

Closes her eyes

Kisses her lips...

Spreads her thighs

He climbs apon the cold hard steel

Being inside her is simply unreal.

She opens her eyes

He licks her neck

Its such a shame he has to cash her check

When they are finished, no words are said

Cause its still hard to say goodbye,

Even when shes dead.




So what did you guys think?....Am I creepy yet?

Tags: poetry writing
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Taint...
December 26, 2009 (Report It)

Wow i remember this one i loved it then and i love it now

Ragdo...
December 13, 2009 (Report It)

I love it!! Creepy is always hot

ne_di502
September 02, 2009 (Report It)

That was pretty dark, but you are a writer, conflicted soul and all. So much symbolism...........WoW pretty good.

mrbear62
July 22, 2008 (Report It)

yes.and i love it
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